Not a Virgin!!, I repeated
Aghast, in my mind
Though outwards difficult
For me was an expression to find
Innocent and cute she was
To me when she first met
Oh God! love was in my fate
From a girl so unchaste
All the moments with her
Happily I had spent
And a simple truth about her
All castles turned to sand
Mr Hyde in me was having
A boisterous hysterical laugh
And was dominating brusquely
The mellow other half
He kept shouting and screaming
Adding insults to her
Calling her names so livid
Which I found impossible to utter
And at moment such as this
Dr jekyll found his voice
And his clever and witty rebuttals
Took Hyde for a surprise
I still remember the day
When together we sat
And for surreal hours
We had those lovely chats
You felt an instant care
In her tender voice
And to her chatter
Could feel positive vibes
The time together you spent
Were best time you ever had
And days without her
Were always sad
It was not only that
With you she was for fun
But even when you were down
She helped you often
Now to you, a question
I’m forced to ask
And this will do nothing
But have you unmasked
Were it the luscious lips
Or her genial smile
Which had captivated
You all this while
Was it her soul
Which you sincerely loved
Or for her body
Was this basal lust
Did to your soul
She make a connect
Or you like a useless git
Were busy looking her vital stats
She told you all about
Her lost virginity
Just because she had
Trust in your emphatic ability
Was she an infidel
Wouldn’t she had it hidden
Rather than telling you
Which might cost this relation
And let me tell you
One thing for sure
She was not wrong then ( while she slept with him)
Nor now is she impure
It is her body and
her bloody decision
And with him not you
she was in relation
And it might be a mistake
On her judgement part
Still she told you all
About the dismal past
Don’t pity on her
For her pleading face
Or accept her just because
Her tears you can’t face
Her love is valuable
And surely a heavenly gift
And you should choose it only
When for it you consider yourself fit
When you truly love her
And her past doesn’t matter
And you two strive hard
To make life mutually better
With these words jekyll
Gave rest to his voice
And Hyde was getting small
Looking like a novice
With a smile I opened
My arms for a hug
Her tears drenched the shoulders
Mine( tears) ruined her make-up
Gazing in her eyes
Holding up her chin
I love you i said
Much more than ever been
Prankies
Such a sweet reply to complement series started by miki.
Mr. Hyde or Mr.jekyll who wins arguments for you?Just think
Happy reading readers
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Yeah… This is exactly the ideal path
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Yeah this is ideally correct. Your poem got me to write four poems in different perspective. This shows how a good topic and a receptive audience can do to a dormant poet😂. Thanks to both of you
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Dormant…😱😱 😏😀
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Really dormant
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Ohk..!!!
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I started writing in class 11 th
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Same this side….
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Took a break, then started again in college. Stopped writing after marriage and for four years didn’t write anything good
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Ohhh… long time…
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Started writing again last year but stopped in this January when naina forced the poet in me to come out of hibernation
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Hehe… no worries…. now we will never close your lid also…
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Let’ s See
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read another poem i wrote after your poem on my blog the scattered beans
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I think i have gone through all….!!! Or just post the name
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Modern Day story
https://thescatteredbeans.wordpress.com/2017/06/29/327/
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Yeah… got that
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This is such an awesome lines….!! I keep on reading this again and again….from yesterday its almost my 10-12 times….!!! I don’t know why I am reading this again and again…. But this is really the best reply I can ever had…!!!👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌
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Thanks a lot dear for your appreciation. Re reading a poem means the contents touched your heart
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