Virgin

Virus Miki

I am not virgin when she said

He became silent as he got mad

It was a dream that turn out to be bad

It was a blunder or her mistake

I thought it was love at first

Later I realized it was lust

He used me and throw me back

My life begin to shake

Then you touched my heart & soul

Without any fear, my past I told

Its up to you to accept me or not

But I know you love me a lot

Only one thing I can say

Don’t leave me please stay

He was my past my mistake

But you are my future my fate

I love you from whole of my heart

Please love me back don’t go apart

                                      ~Virus_miki

Does past speaks your present ?

Does virginity matters more than personality??

Well ! for me the story was innocent love confessing her innocent lust.

What more should I say…I think she was correct…Atleast she was not acting clever…May be this shows her love and innocence enough.

Keep scribbling miki 

Keep raising your voice

Yours loving warrior

Naina

62 thoughts on “Virgin”

  2. Very nicely explained warrior! One thing more I felt in the poem, that the girl is pleading with her guy to accept her love. This tells the attitude of the society how much they fill the girls with guilt.

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    1. This is what I wanted to say…. Why to question on girl… Being honest she explained her bad experience…. Which was correct for her at that particular moment when she was with her ex… She loved him and she trusted him so she was comfortable with him…

      Later on the boy left her…
      After years she found someone else and she thought of being true to him.. so she confessed… And she also beg not to leave ….

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      1. Yes I understood that. It takes a lot of effort and risk to speak up about our past to our present. There is always a fear of him/ her leaving you for a reason like this and it is a great test for the future one too whether they truly love you or not as past never matters to a true love when they have their heart desire with them in present

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          2. Not a Virgin!!, I repeated
            Aghast, in my mind
            Though outwards difficult
            For me was an expression to find

            Innocent and cute she was
            To me when she first met
            Oh God! love was in my fate
            From a girl so unchaste

            All the moments with her
            Happily I had spent
            And a simple truth about her
            All castles turned to sand

            Mr Hyde in me was having
            A boisterous hysterical laugh
            And was dominating brusquely
            The mellow other half

            He kept shouting and screaming
            Adding insults to her
            Calling her names so livid
            Which I found impossible to utter

            And at moment such as this
            Dr jekyll found his voice
            And his clever and witty rebuttals
            Took Hyde for a surprise

            I still remember the day
            When together we sat
            And for surreal hours
            We had those lovely chats

            You felt an instant care
            In her tender voice
            And to her chatter
            Could feel positive vibes

            The time together you spent
            Were best time you ever had
            And days without her
            Were always sad

            It was not only that
            With you she was for fun
            But even when you were down
            She helped you often

            Now to you, a question
            I’m forced to ask
            And this will do nothing
            But have you unmasked

            Were it the luscious lips
            Or her genial smile
            Which had captivated
            You all this while

            Was it her soul
            Which you sincerely loved
            Or for her body
            Was this basal lust

            Did to your soul
            She make a connect
            Or you like a useless git
            Were busy looking her vital stats

            She told you all about
            Her lost virginity
            Just because she had
            Trust in your emphatic ability

            Was she an infidel
            Wouldn’t she had it hidden
            Rather than telling you
            Which might cost this relation

            And let me tell you
            One thing for sure
            She was not wrong then ( while she slept with him)
            Nor now is she impure

            It is her body and
            her bloody decision
            And with him not you
            she was in relation

            And it might be a mistake
            On her judgement part
            Still she told you all
            About the dismal past

            Don’t pity on her
            For her pleading face
            Or accept her just because
            Her tears you can’t face

            Her love is valuable
            And surely a heavenly gift
            And you should choose it only
            When for it you consider yourself fit

            When you truly love her
            And her past doesn’t matter
            And you two strive hard
            To make life mutually better

            With these words jekyll
            Gave rest to his voice
            And Hyde was getting small
            Looking like a novice

            With a smile I opened
            My arms for a hug
            Her tears drenched the shoulders
            Mine( tears) ruined her make-up

            Gazing in her eyes
            Holding up her chin
            I love you i said
            Much more than ever been

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            2. I didn’t find àny other word… After reading this….!! Truly awesome….!!!! Best reply I can ever get…!!!

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              1. Thanks A lot miki! DrJekyll and Mr Hyde are characters from RL Stevenson’s novel which I happened to read while I was young. My poem is just a response to your brilliantlly composed poem, without which I could not have come up with this. I hope I did justice to your poem. Regarding the heart of poem, yes those three stanzas are the point where I felt the poem has achieved its zenith and touched the very point I want to speak and thank you for make up remark , you cleverly understood the humour, for a love story should always end with smile .

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                1. I know about the novel and character names… Though i haven’t read….!!! Actually its also à play…. I exactly didn’t remember the name… Or the name was this only….!!!

                  And yes… I can never find a better reply… I was trying to write… But this character sketch just boost the level of your writing….!! I could not think in this way…. That’s way i was struck…..!!!!

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                    8. But still you added yourself…. As i know many people who just don’t accept the girl because of her terrible experience in past… !!!

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                    9. It’s very difficult to leave oneself out of one’s own poem. And I had once a heated debate with my friends on the same topic and my reply then too was the same

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                    15. Btw… Got to know about your awesome talent…. Thinking while driving….!!!

                      I must say drive carefully…!!!

                      Because a writer has his own world in imagination….!!! Where thir is not a single scope of anyone else except he and his imagination…!

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                    17. This is problem….?? Or a very nice nature ….. !!!👌👌👌.
                      You think in all the directions… Go through all pros and cons….

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                  2. And to tell you the truth I started writng the reply the day i read your poem, but couldnt write more than four lines and those four lines didnt even made to the finals. It was only after today’s discussion I thought of finaly writing it and gave it the shape of contrasting ideology. But as far as If it was me, my immediate response would be that I don’t care about the past

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                  1. Yeah you are right. Though I have got a writer’s block and unless I get myself emotionally active I can’t write a poem and I chose to remain in this realm. Till last year I wrote every now and then but being having a hectic schedule it is very difficult to write while working. But interacting with a younger generation and reading their thoughts take the stress out of my mind. The youthful thoughts you people have keeps the youth in me awake wanting to change the society and the system.

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  3. Hey author….!!
    First of all a huge nd great salute to u for such a nice thought as u raised a Vry difficult topic.
    The people hesitate to talk on this even in Today’s advanced nd so called modern world..
    I know it was nt an easy task for u also, bt the way u did is amazing , mind-blowing…..

    Now everybody can understand this, nd the girl will get proper respect nd the rights….
    Keep scribbling,,, keep raising the rare nd the difficult topics with ur extraordinary thought.. . .
    God Bless…………… !!!

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  4. Hey author….!!
    First of all a huge nd great salute to u for such a nice thought as u raised a Vry difficult topic.
    The people hesitate to talk on this even in Today’s advanced nd so called modern world..
    I know it was nt an easy task for u also, bt the way u did is amazing , mind-blowing…..

    Now everybody can understand this, nd the girl will get proper respect nd the rights….
    Keep scribbling,,, keep raising the rare nd the difficult topics with ur extraordinary thought.. . .
    God Bless…………… !!!

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    1. Thank you for your this many
      commendations and citations….!!!
      I think these are the topics to be raised in society

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    1. You selection of topics really delights me. These are the topics which exhibit the realities of the world and also the challenges ahead us. Keep it up dear. It is my honour that my words encourage you.

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  6. A very difficult and arduous topic you chose to write about which is a less talked about subject bringing out various taboos in the society. First of let me give you accolades for marvelous rhyming scheme and flow of the poem.
    Coming to the topic, the boy, if he truly loves her, shouldn’t be mad at her. He may be shocked to hear the revelation and this might make him dumbstruck for a moment, still the love is about soul not body.

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