It was raining heavily
She was standing in her gallery
Wiping her tears gently
the phone rings suddenly
“You can’t hide anything from me
Stop crying my dear said he”
Strong lightening strike
It was a memory she realize
The rolling tears she wipes
She starts her routined life
Her dream break here
It was almost eight year
She was still full of cheer
But Her silent roar was very clear
. -Virus_miki
“You can’t hide anything from me,Stop crying my dear said he ..Strong lightening strike,It was a memory she realize”
Soooo brilliantly written…created ghoose bumps when I read.
And for that silent roar
how tragic it is
both silent
and roar😢
Keep scribbling miki
Awesome work👍👌
Happy reading readers
Yours loving warrior
Naina
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Another thing touched heart is the title u gv….
Roar bt Silent
SILENT ROAR
Vry nice…….!!!
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Its like the inner voice is shouting….!! But the face and speech is calm , clear and confident… This happen daily and a struggle is very difficult
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Hey author
Another nice assemblence of the words.
Vry nicely u compelled every reader to go back in his or her past…..
As all said goose bumps…..
The best part for me
” U can’t hide anything from me
Stop crying my dear said he…….”
Keep scribbling……
GOD BLESS………..!!!
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Thank you Sir….!!
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My post too has many mistakes due to auto correct so posting the correct version of the poem on the blog
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Wonderfully written and a perfect use of oxymoron as the title.
It certainly raised the goosebumps as naina said.
There are countless nights
When I couldn’t sleep
And those nights are those
In which you silently weep
And just a ping from me
Would lighten your heart
And a lot of solace to you
It’d impart
But a message at this point
Would make you weak
And though we loved borderlands
There are boundaries we can’t speak
And a Weaker you
I always hate to see
It is much abdominal
If that is coz of me
And in next morning when
You ping without fail
I know Some narratives ( in life)
You can’t curtail
We start conversations
With hello and hi
And speak a lot of lies
Before the good bye
Neither you confessed
Nor ever I did speak
Calling each others best friend
Often did the trick.
Still those messages
That affectionate scorn
The lovely discussions we had
Sometimes to me it haunts
We loved each other mutually
And enjoyed time together
And together we are in
Being apart and suffer
Still she has one privilege
I’m deprived off
As when she misses me
She still can leak a drop
But simple it might look
For me it is an arduous task
For remembering her means
Various emotions I have to mask
As to weep I must,
Miss her and should be sad
Or at least her memories
Should make eyes wet and red
But what to do when Her name
brings a smile on my face
And with blushing eyes
Her memories I embrace
So whatever the destiny wants
It’s for God to define
Till then I’m happy to be
In my side of line.
Sorry, I got strayed while commenting on your poem And writing something not related, but it was difficult to stop the brainwave I was having.
Just like in your case warrior has been my motivator too and if in near future she puts on fat we’d give her nickname ‘ Moti Waiter’. Till then warrior keep Motivating
Keep scribbling, but before that keep your eyes on the goal
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Till then I am “happy” to be I my side of line..
and dat is enough👏👏
and I already have lots of stored fats💃
with Moti I am quite used to
but Moti Waiter😝😜😂🤣
ok I will manage with that too😎
and eyes on goal..yes trying to🤓
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Haha….!!! True for you….
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🤣
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Waiter coz you are making me wait for our party 😂
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🙈soon soon soon …!
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Haha….
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Well it was very much related …. May be as a reply of my post….!!!
And thank you for the complements….!!!!☺☺
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Thanks a lot. Btw you people must work upon your spellings
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Yeah…. Was thinking….!!! And doing also….!!!
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😎👍😎
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Thanks naina….!! It was you.. who encouraged me.. …😃😃😘😘
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😙😙and I am glad that encouraged you..👏👏
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☺
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