Best gift I had…

These lines are dedicated to my father… How he helped me in my life’s ladder

Sometimes he become the terror and all the time life savior

जब मैं चल ना सकि मुझे चलना सिखाया

मैं गिर गई, मुझे फिर से उठाया

जहाँ मैं डर गई मुझे विश्वास दिलाया

जब मैं रुक गई मुझे आगे बढ़ाया

जब ठोकर लगी तो मुझे सहलाया

हाथ पकड़ कर मुझे लिखना सिखाया

जब मैं अकेले हुई मेरा हौसला बढ़ाया

मुझे तकलीफ में देख, उन्हें रोना आया

एक अनोखा रिश्ता हमने बनाया

जहाँ ना अपेक्षा और ना उपेक्षा को पाया

हमेशा मान सम्मान बढ़ाया

ईस फिकी सी दुनिया को रंगों से सजाया ।

(He helped when I crawl

He hold me when I fall

He listens when I call

I am his cute doll…!!! )

आज सब बदल रहा है 

वक्त का पहिया पलट रहा है 

पेड़ के पत्तों की तरह टूट रहें हैं वो

और मुझे अपना दर्द छुपाना पड़ रहा है

  As the time flow

Old he grow

He can’t start his car

He silently looks the star

Many times helpless he feel

And I am the one who can heal….

Hope you understand the feeling I am trying to express… Add some more if you feel the same…. . And do let me know your views if they are different in the comment section below….!!!

Thanks & Regards


Wonderful writing miki! 

Every daughter heart will respond to this…so is mine responding❤❤

Well! Time changes and he starts becoming weak and old but I don’t think you should hide anything from him even the pain.

Like when you were kid you told him you fall and he healed you made you walk again but at that time if yoh were aware he will be also hurt seeing you fall,you would have never told him.Similar is the situation today,you can still share because 

if you are mature now he is also experienced now.

So much of pains he has seen in his life,I don’t think your pain is that big that it will anywhere add to his breakdown..

But if you share, your act of sharing will be very big,infact that big that may help him soothingly break.

(Just an advice,I dnt knw if its right,but I guess it is)

And lastly I would like to slightly change the title that its not the best gift you had…Its best gift you still have and will always have.

Keep scribbling miki

Happy reading readers 

Yours loving warrior


6 thoughts on “Best gift I had…

  1. Thanks naina for your views…
    But in my case it’s quite different…
    I tried to share…
    But then they start more to bother….
    Some times i feel its generation gap…
    Some time i feel its age effect

    As it is said पचपन के बाद बचपन


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