Time you are taking to decide
I can judge
you are a thinker
And I am also learning to
patiently think like you
and smater now I be
Time you take to promise
I can judge
You are trustworthy
And I am also trying to
learn to wait for right time like you
And to be a promising being
Time you easily spend with yourself
I can judge
You know to be satisfied and happy
And I am also learning like you
to be happy me
Everytime I see you prioritize
I can judge
Your focused vision
And I am also learning to focus like you
and now I remain unaffected and still
When you answer my queries
I can judge
You are a problem solver
And I am now learning to think like you
and solve on my own queries however tough they be
The way you end up convincing me
I can judge
You are a supportive diplomat
And I am also learning to influence like you
keeping my arguments now stronger and free
The way you are frank
I can judge
You give honest opinions
And I am also learning to be honest like you
And even when opinions turn against me
But the way you dominate at times
I can judge
Your ego
but thats the only thing I want to teach you
And some day I will surely
So much I have learnt from you
I have almost copied you by now
By judging you I learnt
As if judging was my learning key
Never unnecessary pedagogy you did
Therefore I never fear to admit
That I learnt not because
You were a teacher
Spoonfeeding me
You were an inspiration
And I was a observer who judged
And learnt so much keenly
So much it is
That sometimes now I feel
To make you mine
And keep you always as my observing plea
So that I could judge you more
And for ever keep learning for freeππ
Happy reading!
Like this post if you also keep judging people not to find their faults but to learn from them.
Yours loving warrior
Naina
Being Judged also teach….
Judge Not that you’ll not be judged
Very truly The Bible said
and proving that propsition
A beautiful poem you have made
and whatsoever people say
They judge you all along
And percieve (You) through their eyes
whtehter they are right or wrong
Out in the cruel world
in a tender age
was like an experience
one has in a maze
And one of the learning
which this experience taught
was people will scrutinize
your every single thought
And you’ll be judged
for everything you’d do
Many goods would be forgotten
and you’d be castigated for few
And like a balloon it’d burst
the inflated ego of self
from a pinch of pin
You can jus see but cant help
So judgements can break you
may hamper your free thoughts
and can inflict injuries
by tying you into knots
Still i believe them to be good
for they see what they want
and you know what is good for you
by their slander and chants
You know you’ll be judged
will keep you from going stray
And you’ll keep doing good things
And for you in long run it’ll pay
You know you words always
will be scrutnized
And you gain better control
and know what needs to be voiced
Your attitude and social aptitude
will soon begin to grow
for inner pshyche of people
for you, it’ll be easier to know
So I know that i’m being judged
I know accordingly i’m adjuged
And For whole world I open chapters few
The concealed thoughts known to very few
So being judged and judging
both teaches us for sure
but requires a student adamant
who is willing and mature.
A very thoughtful poem warrior. Loved reading it and a day before reading it i was thinking to write a poem how being judged help us being better in life. In your next poem Questioned though you have shown the negative realm of the judgements of people. So what i believe is people will question each and every thing you do, criticize you, mock you but the mature person is who listens to all but knows to discern the best path available to him/her for the success. Its all about being positive in whatever position one is in life and make most of it.
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Awesome..d day before u were thinking to write on the same topic..and I stealed your thoughts..
And your comment deserve anothrr post! ππππ
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π i like this!
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Thnks joan
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