True love – 3


But if there are conditions in love 

Is it suitable to call it love

True you are when you are confused 

True you are when you don’t know how to choose 

Its also true that there are many 

And to heal us have ability uncanny 
And nothing truer when you say 

Distinguish, how, between true and untrue, one may 

And yes love is a mysterious thing 

It is much more than amorous fling 
We can have many with whom we connect 

There are many who we attract 

But if the connect gets lost with time 

What if you feel it as a worthless dime
The commitments we  certainly make 

Some we fulfill some we break 

All commitments are not by choice 

Many are thurst upon in disguise 
Still it is a parameter important 

How can there  be trust without commitment 

But if there are conditions in love 

Is it suitable to call it love 

For me love is infinity 

One that starts and end at eternity 

The one which is above desires 

Stays intact, despite what fate conspires

Prankies

Perfect reply by Prankies to my last post “Love true,untrue” which itself was  written to his post ” true love”.

So, this is 3rd one in our poetic love series😅 TRUE LOVE.

Loved your last 3 paragraphs.

However my concept with true love and commitment still remains quite same but it got an optimistic boost.

But awesomely crafted poem.

Happy reading everone!

Have a nice day😁

Yours loving 

Warrior Naina😃

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